Inking Page 5 - Hymn of the Pearl

I am turning in 2 pages for my Illustrating the Graphic Novel Class with Andy Fish through Emerson Professional Program/Extension Online.  I have taken this class several times.  It really helps me. I am going to re-ink some of this page.  It is not holding together for me.  I will see what Andy's comments are.

 

I think this panel is working fine.  Maybe too dark under the arch.

 I like this panel.

 I am going to try this panel without atmosphere spatter.

 I am going to try this panel with just white in Gaspar's face.

 I think this panel is ok.

 This one has two different styles I am going to redo this one.