Page 22b - Hymn of the Pearl

Here is a lot of what it takes for me to do my graphic Novel.  Here is some work on page 22b.

On the left are my word balloons on the left our my teacher Andy Fish's corrections.

Here is a refined pencil page

Here is an ink page using line.

Here is an ink page using more shadow.

Here are my initial thumbnail pencils on the right with Andy Fish's suggestions on the left.